Well that was quite the story. It felt more like three independent stories than one short story and I enjoyed all 3. To start with the the first part, the story of a young girl talking to her Mom. This had a very different style than Hemingway, it was so heavy on dialog. Personally, I really liked this, it made me care more about the characters, also as a teenager I found this part to be quite relatable. I mean who hasn’t had that conversation with their mother at some point.
The story then moved on to the young man and Sybil. Intriguingly, at no point are we ever given his name and I’m still not quite sure what their relationship is. Overall, though, the story was pretty normal and complacent. Though, I was worried for Sybil’s safety the entire time, something didn’t quite feel right about that situation. I was especially worried when he started talking about the Bananafish drowning, I was afraid he might be foreshadowing something. Yet, in the end, they both return to the shore and Sybil runs off. But, It did feel like Sybil may have known something wasn’t quite right, when she ran off.
The third part of the story then starts and my god did that escalate quickly. The way Salinger did that in so few lines was absolutely shocking. It reminded me a lot of the story “My Old Man” from In Our Time, when the Dad dies so suddenly in the horse racing accident. The end also leaves me with a lot of questions. Who was that girl? Was it the daughter from the start or someone else? Was the young man the boyfriend? I think it was but i’m not quite sure. Also why was he so angry about the girl looking at his feet? Whatever the answers to these questions are, if there are any, J. D Salinger appears to be quite the impressive writer and has managed to enthrall me in a way that Hemingway just couldn’t quite do.